Chanson en anglais

Salut à tous ! Comment vous portez-vous ?

J'ai écrit une chanson en anglais, j'en appelle aux anglophones pour me donner leur avis Wink

Rebeca

There's this wonderful girl in my head
I fell in love with her and now I'm afraid
'Cause tomorrow she'll be gone
All these moments of magic
Will only be memories it's horrific
And I'm listening to these sad songs alone...

I remember that first night,
You know, I never believed in that kind of love at first sight
But I liked you as soon as our eyes met
Then you invited me to dance, we formed a nice duet
I told ya 'bout this certain something you got
I don't know if it was the intensity in your eyes,
The smoothness of your hands, the cuteness of your smiles
Or the sensuality you had but believe it or not
It was like you bewitched me it's amazin'
And the moment after as we were talkin'
It felt like except for you and your voice there was nottin'
After that the more I saw you the more I liked you
I enjoyed again the crazy feeling of holding your hand
Wishing it'd never end
I spent hours looking at your pictures
And there was that night at the restaurant
It was so good savouring this moment
At the beginning I looked at the crowd and felt so proud
Then we started talkin' and I was so mesmerized, so I realized
Listenin' to your pretty voice, seein' how wonderful you were
And how happy I was to be there
That what I felt was way more than liking you
Yeah, it was this night I knew I loved you

There's this wonderful girl in my head
I fell in love with her and now I'm afraid
'Cause tomorrow she'll be gone
All these moments of magic
Will only be memories it's horrific
And I'm listening to these sad songs alone...

You know, I don't fall in love that easily
You got something special, really
I hope Luis knows he's freakin' lucky
Since the first night I haven't been able to stop thinkin' 'bout ya
And today my heart's bleedin' for ya
'Cause now the story's nearly over
And I'd like to say "no matter" but I'd be a liar
Yeah it's so hard to endure
This horrible feeling that you won't be there no more
I'm gettin' mad, I've rarely been that sad
You may find this ridiculous
But in my mind these words sound thunderous
You surely can't have realized how much you matter
But now I think you seize the measure
I told you that I'm not a believer
But in a way I've been blessed to meet you
Even if now there's this pain I gotta go through
I'm writin' the verses in this lonely place
Tryin' to hold back the tears
Tryin' to hide from my fears
But I can't, the water flows down my face
I could write so many rhymes
I feared this moment so many times
We probably won't ever meet again
But you won't get out of my brain
Hey, this is how it ends
But OK, I'm pleased we've at least been friends
It was a great experience
With the fragrance of romance

There's this wonderful girl in my head
I fell in love with her and now I'm afraid
'Cause tomorrow she'll be gone
All these moments of magic
Will only be memories it's horrific
And I'm listening to these sad songs alone...

Joli !

Et je remarque que tu tombes souvent amoureux, à la longue. Tu as raison, c'est une très belle chose. En tous cas, toi, tu fais de belles choses avec ça.

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Dans la tête à Frédy

On dira que les femmes m'inspirent Wink

Ceci dit pour celle qui était concerné par le post "Derniers en date", je pense que j'étais plus attaché au fait d'avoir une copine qu'à la fille en elle-même. C'est d'ailleurs pour ça que je n'ai quasiment rien écrit sur elle par rapport à Jeanne. La fille dont parle la présente chanson est la seule à avoir réussi à me la sortir un peu de la tête, mais c'est encore un truc impossible. D'un côté j'ai de la chance parce que je tombe sur des filles super, mais de l'autre je ne peux pas les avoir. Le sort est désespérant Smile

Je connais mal l'anglais, mais suffisamment quand même pour apprécier cette jolie chanson !
L'amour est souvent une histoire de cache-cache, mais tu trouveras un jour la fille qui éclipsera toutes les autres dans ton coeur. Tu es jeune avec encore tant de choses à faire, à écrire, à ressentir.
Bravo pour tes écrits, en tout cas, je suis contente que tu continues dans cette voie.

Merci Scouby ! J'ai apporté quelques petites modifications au texte au passage, on m'a fait remarquer plusieurs erreurs. Dommage que je n'aie pas pu les corriger avant de le donner à l'intéressée --'

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